Rinafera Woxwitty III
Ret. War Commander
Head Boundary Guardian
Head Boundary Guardian && Retired War Commander
Posts: 696
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Skylark
Feb 23, 2007 0:32:15 GMT -5
Post by Rinafera Woxwitty III on Feb 23, 2007 0:32:15 GMT -5
Well, at the end capitalaztion and grammaer was a bit off. But still kinda around 7.5
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Skylark
Feb 23, 2007 23:24:54 GMT -5
Post by Songwind and Brawn Oakbrush. on Feb 23, 2007 23:24:54 GMT -5
Yeah, you know I only have Song's history to go by? I'm writing this as I post. It isn't written elsewhere. I'm gonna edit it someday though.
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Rinafera Woxwitty III
Ret. War Commander
Head Boundary Guardian
Head Boundary Guardian && Retired War Commander
Posts: 696
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Skylark
Feb 24, 2007 0:51:45 GMT -5
Post by Rinafera Woxwitty III on Feb 24, 2007 0:51:45 GMT -5
Thats fine, and its written well. I like it.
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Skylark
Feb 24, 2007 8:35:58 GMT -5
Post by Songwind and Brawn Oakbrush. on Feb 24, 2007 8:35:58 GMT -5
Thankee...Bows....WIll get around to it soon...
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Rinafera Woxwitty III
Ret. War Commander
Head Boundary Guardian
Head Boundary Guardian && Retired War Commander
Posts: 696
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Skylark
Feb 24, 2007 10:34:24 GMT -5
Post by Rinafera Woxwitty III on Feb 24, 2007 10:34:24 GMT -5
Coooooool...
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Skylark
Mar 27, 2007 21:46:24 GMT -5
Post by Songwind and Brawn Oakbrush. on Mar 27, 2007 21:46:24 GMT -5
Helbren's indignant face shouted outrage at his son's actions. " How dare he! Without Consulting me! Humph." Helbren walked away, livid with anger.
Song felt weak, and sank down to the floor. Asney smiled softly and then went of to follow her husband, whispering the her Daughter in Law a quick message, " I'll take care of him love."
The young squirrel maid held back tears of hatred for Helbren's cruel remarks. Had he no more respect for his own son's decisions than that? Song dragged herself to the stairs, standing up and going back to the room her family was staying in.
The healer cleaned herself up, trying to look like nothing had happened. She wished she could make it so. Song walked down to Great hall, and only the close observer would notice that her step had lost some spring. One who knew her might wonder where her legendary smile was this day.
No one said anything as Song snuck down into her seat. She grabbed a scone and then set it down, looking forlornly out the window and down the path. No Brawn.
There was an Empty seat beside. No Brawn to fill it. Asney and Helbren didn't seem to notice the pretty wife's distress, not even acknowledging her presence.
Song melted into her seat, then got up. She needed to talk to someone.
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Skylark
Apr 23, 2007 20:39:26 GMT -5
Post by Songwind and Brawn Oakbrush. on Apr 23, 2007 20:39:26 GMT -5
An unhappy squirrel stormed through the abbey, her stomach forgetting its normal rumblings. She stopped by the the tapestry and looked at Martin. He seemed to smile down at her, his eyes reminding her of the way Brawn's looked when he smiled at her. Song tried to forget Brawn, but she tried in vain.
Song dashed down the hall and started screaming a name. "Dandis! Dandis! Dandiss! Come here!" Dandiss was Song's hedgehog friend who she had left at the abbey when she went to find her brothers. " Dandiss!"
The hedge hog ran into Song, bumping the squirrel to the floor. Dandiss smiled a little at her friend, and started to say, "Braw- Oh. He's gone?" She looked expectantly at Song.
Song nodded slowly, the tears spilling once more from her eyes. The thought of Brawn made her wipe them away with one wide yellow sleeve. " He left last night."
Dandiss looked at Song like a badgermother would look at a dibbun. " So you decided to run out in your nightdress with the mess your headfur is in. Really. What kind of example to Daffodil are you being? Is she still in her nightgown too? "
The disheveled squirrel looked ashamed, and then spoke slowly. " I dressed her. "
Dandiss grinned. " Come on, We can talk on the way back to your room."
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Skylark
Apr 28, 2007 18:01:37 GMT -5
Post by Raiden and Zahi on Apr 28, 2007 18:01:37 GMT -5
Very, very good! I like...
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